Internet Safety For Children

can u please give me ur opinion on it and fix the mistakes in there tanks

This marvelous book will touch on some very serious points; any average 12 or 13 will possibly face at some time in their life. In this essay I mostly focus on internet safety, and how you can use it for beneficial reasons. Usually for kids it is very hard to understand what kind of predators are behind the computer screen; but the story of dear Jo will explain all the hazards that a child/teen can face while on the internet. All readers, in all ages will find this book interesting and to make it a little more exciting I will write a brief summary of Dear Jo in the next two paragraphs. Every child must understand the risks of using a specific website or using the internet at all. I personally prefer to use the internet to communicate with my friends and family that I don’t get the opportunity to see often, or to research for school references.

This marvelous book touches on very serious issues, that any average teenager will possibly face at some time in their life. In this essay, I focus mainly on internet safety, and how one can use it for beneficial reasons. Usually for kids, it is hard to understand what kind of predators are behind the computer screen; but, the story of dear Jo explains all of the hazards that a child and teenager may face while on the internet. Readers of all ages will find this book interesting. Every child must understand the risks of using a specific website, or using the internet at all. It is preferable to use the internet to communicate with friends and family, or to research for school references.

its best not to use "i" in a paper (i assume this is for school). also don’t tell the reader you will summarize something, instead just summarize it in the next paragraph.

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